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Innocence is Falling by ~ForestEden:iconForestEden:



By Forest Eden

Innocence is falling,
It doesn’t know the way,
It just knows that it saw you,
Standing there that day.

Some say that you’re listening,
Some say that you hear.
Some say that you’re falling from,
All that you hold dear.

Innocence is falling,
For they were led astray,
Innocence is calling you,
To say what you will say.

Innocence is crying dear,
Just take the pain away,
For innocence is falling dear,
And doesn’t know the way.
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I'm not really sure. I just get this way when I'm tired. Ideas become strange and words come easy. I guess this one is open to interpretation.
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I really like this; it flows so well. Its kind of sad in a way. I think its a reflection of society nowadays. *nods sagely*

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That's good. You did a realy nice job.

I'd have to aggree with Ravean that this sounds like it's a reflection of society today, especially here in America. Sad. Very, very sad what is most important to most people here.

:peace:

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Love is a verb.
It is... sad. Thank you for your interpretation, I think you are correct. I suppose this has been on my mind recently, how nobody is innocent anymore, even the little kids who should be.

It's really amazing what floats up to the surface when you're tired. Thanks for the favorite dear.

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We must love people for their imperfections, because no one is perfect. If we love people only for their perfections, then we cease to love at all. ~Me

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Thank you Thorvold. And I agree with Ravean's interpretation too, I think. It is sad when so many people are valuing the wrong things.

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We must love people for their imperfections, because no one is perfect. If we love people only for their perfections, then we cease to love at all. ~Me

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You know, the more I read it the more I like it. It's pretty right on the mark. God help us... as only He can. :peace:

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Love is a verb.

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